A step beyond

Talented writing makes things happen in the reader’s mind — vividly, forcefully — that good writing, which stops with clarity and logic, doesn’t.

~ SFWA Grand Master Samuel R. Delany

The secret locked within

The most important things are the hardest to say. They are the things you get ashamed of, because words diminish them — words shrink things that seemed limitless when they were in your head to no more than living size when they’re brought out. But it’s more than that, isn’t it? The most important things lie too close to wherever your secret heart is buried, like landmarks to a treasure your enemies would love to steal away. And you may make revelations that cost you dearly only to have people look at you in a funny way, not understanding what you’ve said at all, or why you thought it was so important that you almost cried while you were saying it. That’s the worst, I think. When the secret stays locked within not for want of a teller but for want of an understanding ear.
~ Stephen King

Strangeness

Strangeness is the one quality in fiction that cannot be faked.

~ John Gardner, On Becoming a Novelist

Write that first novel

“They say everybody has a novel inside them, and that’s usually the best place to keep it. Really.”

I think that’s snarky and facile and not helpful at all.

Keep that novel inside you, and you’ll never get to writing the second, third, or fourth book that hopefully will be better.

I, an unpublished nobody, say: write that first book. Just don’t expect too much of it, and don’t stop there.

What Should I Expect From My First Novel?