Narrative Structure

A long and thoughtful piece by Maggie Stiefvater on narrative structure.

“… as a professional storyteller, it’s my job to know what is invisible (and thus costs the reader nothing) versus what is now outside the norm (and thus costs the reader something to process). I don’t mind asking the reader to work for things that are important to me, but I need to know when I’m doing it in order to make sure I can keep their overall load light enough that they don’t lose emotional investment and trade my novel for Netflix. “

Epics, Break-Up Songs, & That Old Chestnut, ‘Just Because You Don’t Like It Doesn’t Make It Bad’

Happy (belated) anniversary to me!

I was just reminded that it’s been a year since I started this web site. A bit more — it was February 20, 2018. There have been a smattering of posts since then, but I’ve also posted a lot here from other sources from years predating the establishment of this site. You might enjoy looking through them. I enjoyed writing them.

Fridays

Bagliere Ronald has been posting some of his photos on his Facebook page, and suggested I post some of my poems. I’ve posted some in the past. Maybe I’ll post some more of them.

Ron has his own blog over at https://rjbagliere.com. Check it out!

Fridays

Fridays must be strong
to hold back the surge
of the restless hordes
who wish it was Saturday already

The Simple Things

He liked the simple things in life.
A pepperoni pizza and a beer.
Soft ice cream on a warm summer night.
Long walks on the beach.
The warmth of a red plaid flannel shirt.
Changing to a wolf and howling under the full moon.

When the intent to create clickbait intersects with bad writing

I’ve commented on bad, misleading, attention-grabbing headlines before, and this one compounds it with the use of the passive voice in a misleading way:
“Coach Jim Boeheim was involved in a fatal car crash last night.”
Until you hear the story (it was on the radio), it makes you wonder: involved in a fatal car crash? Was he killed?
No. He was the driver of a car that struck and killed someone.
Second: since when do we refer to a car hitting someone as being “in a car crash”? Technically, I guess, it’s accurate, but it’s misleading.
Third, the passive voice: “was involved in”? He was driving the car that hit and killed someone, so sure, he was “involved.” The car didn’t do it all on its own.
My sympathies go out to the man who was killed, and his friends and family, and to Coach Boeheim and HIS friends and family. From all accounts, this was a tragic accident. Roads were slippery/icy; I was out on them myself a little more than an hour earlier. Coach Boeheim was apparently trying to avoid a car that has spun out and was in the road in front of him and in that effort, he struck someone on the shoulder of the road. But for the radio to word things this way is irresponsible, the audio equivalent of clickbait, and it brings discredit on those who would do this for the purpose of sensationalizing a tragic situation.